together the commons

.
 seminal
  herselves
, child , mother
  comparatively unnoticed in sentimental
  traversal , our planet , the cosmos at
a comparative unvoiced
  loss regarding
  most any prior recollection so
  regarding such similarly oblivious
  common excesses , sedentary
  gravity, sunlight, diet, temporality via
a comparative sentimentality
  laid down yet , otherwise ,
  quite similar over there
  across some brief span of
  time , hypnotic - to
  her alternative self in
  a sufficiently compassionate ageing
  daughter's guise traversing
  together the commons
  at just such
a differing decade or
  two atop
  comparatively concrete representations
  constructed upon literal
 sedimentations
.